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Что внутри у колобка?
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Ответ S.cream в «Что внутри у колобка?»


What's the best way to discover

What's inside the Kolobock?

May be if you were to eat it

You'd find out there was a frog?


May be there's a ballet dancer

Eating hotdogs under bed?

Are there hedgehogs setting sail,

A space rocket painted red?


Was it yeti you've just seen there?

Child's laughter you've just heard?

Or inside it you could find the

Cuttest kitten in the world?


Need a way to know the contents

Of this round pastry dish

Cus if you were, say, allergic

You would die if there's a fish.


Or some strawberies, or peanuts

Roaming there by themselves

Or your neighbor, uncle Dennis

(harmful to your mental healh)


What's the best way to discover

What's inside this 3d blyn?

May be if you were to eat it

You'd find out that there's just spleen?


Very tired letter "I" sits

lonely on a chimney top

Late train travels out of schedule

(Cannot reach it's final stop)


There's stranger walking somewhere

Lighting lanterns on his way

Is it you, a little younger,

Found a place inside to stay?


What's inside the Kolobock, huh?

That what we need to decide.

May be it is full of promise

May be there's just dough inside

Постарался написать как можно ближе к русскому варианту. (ближе к концу уже поднадоело и качество упало)

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Ответ на пост «Что внутри у колобка?»

Стрельнуло что-то.

Перевёл.

Не знаю зачем, оно само. От текста постарался далеко не уходить.


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What's inside the Kolobock?

May be river or the fog?

May be if you eat him, darling,

It will be like drinking grog?


May be ballet dancer there

Undercovered eats hotdog?

Or the space man and the rocket,

Or the sailors and hedgehog?


May be children laughing loud,

May be yeti hugging cloud?

Or, inside the Kolobock

Meowing cat with ticking clock?


It is so important thing - know what Kolob has within.

What if you are an allergic

And the seafood inside him?


Or the peanuts, or the beans,

Or the strawberries, not clean?

Now you see, you must exactly know what Kolobock has in.


What's inside the Kolobock?

Longing sadness? Neighbour's knock?

Train, which goes to the down

With no destination point?


May be stranger in the forest,

Cat with lamp, and giant frog?

May be you inside, but younger?

May be little orange crock?


It is so important thing - know what Kolobock has in.

May be only hope remaining?

Or the flour? Ah, hell with him.

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Я не настоящий переводчик, поэтому строго не судите, но за указание ошибок буду благодарен.

ВНИМАНИЕ: большинство тегов перешли из поста, на который я ответил, сам я их не ставил!!!

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